Poetry Essay

Author: cdelling

Chris Delling

Professor Wexler

English 495ESM

10 February 2010

Carpe Diem

Dylan Thomas’ classic villanelle, “Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night” is commonly interpreted as a son’s pleading with his father to fend off death’s cold grasp. And that is an accurate interpretation, in part. When examined more closely, however, we begin to see that “DNGGiTGN” is just as much about life as it is about death. Indeed, the majority of the poem is actually an exhortation, coupled with a warning, to live life to the fullest.

In Thomas’ first stanza, the speaker begins with the metaphorical refrain, “Do not go gentle into that good night” (1). The words “good night” serve a dual purpose. One, they set the tone for the rest of the poem: night is a metaphor for death. Two, and perhaps more telling, is the juxtaposition of “good” and “night.” We know this poem is about death, so how can it be good? In addition to setting the tone with this key phrase, Thomas also tells us how to read his work: antithesis will play an important role. Keeping that in mind, the diametrical opposite of death is life, which, the speaker is imploring us to live to the fullest. We see evidence of this in the next four stanzas.

In the second stanza the speaker talks of “wise men” knowing “at their end” that “dark is right.” The phrase “wise men” is a metaphor for those who have lived their lives in glorious fashion. They’re wise because they recognized the ephemeral nature of life, and seized upon every moment. They know, “dark is right” because no one can escape death, but they don’t fear it either, for they have truly lived. Thomas sets this as the example to live by.

In the following three stanza’s we’re introduced to men who failed to recognize life’s fleeting nature. Stanza three, for instance, begins with “good men,” a metaphor for youth and purity. These men have not yet been tainted by the beauty and the horror that is life. These “good men” are described as “crying how bright/their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay” (7-8). They never got a chance to achieve anything; their deeds are “frail”: they’re the deeds of men who hadn’t the time to really accomplish anything of note. Instead, they passed before their time, in the spring (green bay) of their lives. To close the stanza the speaker exhorts, “Rage, rage against the dying of the light” (9). This is a warning to all: enjoy every moment you’re given and take nothing for granted. To “rage against the dying of the light” (9) is thus, to not only live, but to live every moment as if it may be your last.

Stanza four begins with “Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight” (10). The phrase “Wild men” is a metaphor for those who lived to reach maturity, those who lived to see the day at its brightest. They saw “the sun in flight,” (10) saw what life had to offer. But they “learn[ed] too late” (11) that life is more than waking up, going to bed, and all that’s in between. They didn’t appreciate the opportunity they had been given and “grieved it (life) on its way” (11). This is a further warning: even those who’re fortunate enough to bask in the sun’s rays, who reach maturity, who live life by convention, will grieve, upon their deathbeds, for the path they chose. “Do Not Go Gentle into that good night” (12) says the speaker. His refrain reminds us, the reader, to live. Simply existing is not enough. We cannot go gently towards death, we must meet it head on, knowing that we did everything in our power to squeeze every last ounce out of our lives, knowing that we didn’t waste a single moment.

Stanza five begins with the phrase “grave men,” a metaphor with a double meaning. Grave, in this instance, means both those close to death, and those grave of mind. These are the men that have reached the end of their journey. They’ve left the harbor, battled the squalls, sailed the open seas, and can see the harbor once more. What’s more, they “see with blinding sight” (13). Thomas uses antithesis once again to illustrate the diametrically opposed concepts of life and death. In addition, we can interpret “blinding sight” as those who may be literally blind—somewhat common with old age—but can still look back upon the lives they led. The next line is most telling, however, for these men came so close to truly living. “Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay” (14) if only they had realized what they had been given. The operative word in line 14 is could. If only they’d lived a glorious life, a life where every moment was cherished, where every desire was fulfilled, where every goal was accomplished, they could “be gay.” But they didn’t, and like the youth and men of age that preceded them, these men serve as yet another example of why one should “rage against the dying of the light” (15).

In the final stanza the poem takes on a more personal tone. The speaker opens, “And you, my father, there on sad height/curse, bless, me now with your fierce tears, I pray” (16-17). We find that not only is the reader implored to seize the day, but so, too, is the speaker’s father. One can surmise that the speaker’s father is on his death bed as the speaker exhorts one last time, “Do not go gentle into that good night/Rage, rage against the dying of the light” (18-19). One also gets the sense that the speaker’s father did not live his life to the fullest and, accordingly, the final two lines are spoken in sorrow. They’re tinged with regret, but also with the reminder that the speaker, too, must live by his own words.

Thus, “Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night” is just as much about life as it is about death; in fact, even more so. The speaker urges us to use the men he cites as examples. If we fail to recognize what life has to offer, we can never truly live it. And if we can never truly live it, then our final moments on this earth will be filled with regret and despair. To “rage against the dying of the light” is therefore an exhortation to live every moment as if it was your last.


Works Cited

Deutsch, Babette. Poetry Handbook A Dictionary of Terms. New York: Collins, 1982.

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Thomas, Dylan. "Do Not Go Gently into That Good Night." 100 Best Loved Poems. New

York: Dover Publications, 1995. 93. Print.

4 Responses to "Poetry Essay"

  1. gravatar Unknown Says:

    I like that you found a lot of polarity in the theme of the poem. You did a good job at seeking out the contrasts of death and life. The only recommendation I would have for revision would be to cite some academic sources- maybe find some articles that confirm the great analysis you found already. This was also part of the assignment, and I am sure if you plugged the title of the poem into an article search on the CSUN library you would find some articles. I really liked the lines you used as evidence for your argument- and agree that this poem can be interpreted as being more about life than death. This is one of the more popular poems in the anthology- and I imagine many if not all 21st century Americans can identify with the theme of not wasting your life. I'm not entirely sure if everyone would feel the same about the poem- but know wasted expectations is a viable theme.

  2. gravatar Caitlin McGinn Says:

    You do a very good job explicating this poem. I never thought of this poem as being a Carpe Diem poem and you did a good job explaining how you came to interpret it that way. I would like to see evidence from scholars who also view the poem in this way. The almost line by line discussion backs up your opinons well, but it would be interesting to hear another view point. It would also be interesting to see you defend your stance against a more traditional interpretation. Your thesis was clear and well thought out. You mention that the poem is a villanelle, so I expected to read about what that style is. I think that could be an interesting addition to your essay because you can say what the effect of that form is, why Thomas picked it. This is one of my favorite poems, I almost wrote about it, but I had done it for a previous semester.

  3. gravatar Kira Says:

    Your analysis of the poem is very insightful and thorough. I like when you said that the poem professes that "we cannot go gently towards death, we must meet it head on, knowing that we did everything in our power to squeeze every last ounce out of our lives, knowing that we didn’t waste a single moment." I think that maybe going into some of the mechanics of the poem would have been helpful and offered a complete analysis of the poem. Overall, though, the essay was very enjoyable to read.

  4. gravatar dreamg18 Says:

    I really liked your analysis of "Do not go gentle into that Good night". The anger that the speaker has towards his father is so vivid and at times heart breaking. I would have to say that the rage against the dying of the light, is not only a carpe diem moment but also as rage against the world. Though the poem is very dark; i can see the darkness as a glimmer of hope. There is always a light at the end of every tunnel.I enjoyed your analysis of every stanza, it helps the reader have a better understanding of the poem itself. I am very drawn to the relationship bewtween the speaker and the father, my only suggestion was to focus a little more on that realtionship. Overall great analysis!

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